Next take two...

I have completed editing and handed my second draft of my film opening, the mark I got back was a C. Satisfactory but not great, to improve my grade I plan on re doing my sound, making it more smooth and adding a more jumpy sound track to the jumpy parts. I also plan on making my transitions smoother, as well as cutting down a certain part of it so interest doesn't stray. However i plan on keeping most of the background noise out, as it gives my opening a more realist theme, which in what i want.

Video Intraduction...

For my Video, I have decided to do a short shorty and the mythical creature 'slenderman', the theme of this storey will be horror/thriller. The target audience for this will be between 15 and 20 years old and the class will be C1 - E. This movie will be about a boy who becomes 'Slenderman' one day while playing with his drums, instead of out with his friends because he was painfully shy. She now, because of his lonelyness, if anyone looks at him directly, he will follow them (but only moving when now one is looking) until he get close enough to touch, at which point, the person absorbles into his body. One day a group of friends crosses slendermans path, and start teasing him, so, inevertably, he starts talking them, one by one absorbing them into his body. However the friends find out about him and realise that when ever he is coming near, you her a drum solo.